Wednesday, 10 June 2009


Door hogaye kab ke hum
Phir bhi tujhe mehsoos karte hai hum
Najane kahan chupe ho...
Phir bhi teri aahat mehsoos karte hai hum

Jaane kaisa khel hai ye
Na tum mere ho,
Na main tumhari
Phir bhi ...kuch hai hamara

Tera naam sunte hai..
Toh dil mein ek ahat si hoti hai
Tujhe najane kyun dhoondte hai
Dhoond kar phir bhool jaate hai

Teri chaukhat pe mila tha sirf dard
Paar ki thi tune bewafai ki har hadd
Toda iss qadar mera dil
Rehgaye tere dard ke nishaan

Har qadam teri raah mein dhoka paaya
Phir bhi najane kyun rehta hai mere sang
Tera hi Saaya.....


Satans Darling™ said...


fms1988 said...

@ Ash is it :) if so then thank you

Hopeless Romantic said...


beautifully penned !

But, shouldn't Phir Bhi be two words rather than Phirbi ? :D


Hopeless Romantic said...

I am ahead of LMR, ask Ms.R for its full form :P

fms1988 said...

@ Amit...Thank's..Ummm i'll correct it now :) & yea ur ahead :P

Anonymous said...

really beautiful .. u made me wish i could write smthing this good in hindi !! :)

fms1988 said...

@ Pretty :D that comment made me smile coz like half n hr ago i jus left someone a comment saying "I wish i could write like that" :)

PULKIT said...

it was wrapped beautifully dear!
I loved the way it ended... m glad the ending was the source of the title...
aakhri 3 lines mein jaan thi!
bahut acha thought tha... could feel what u were trying to convey throughout!
well done!
keep writing!!

fms1988 said...

@ Pulkit thanks :)i like the last 3 lines alot !
lovely 2 c ur comments again :)

Vinnie said...

why do we love despite so much pain??? why ?? why ???

fms1988 said...

@ Vinnie...because in LOVE we have hope :)thats why even after our heart breaks we do it all over again...HOPING that maybe that time round it'l work !:)

Mahesh Sindbandge said...

Another Good poem from you...

I have written few such poems and drafted them many times... But wouldnt really dare to post them as they are painful like this one of yours..

keep writing :-)

Mahesh Sindbandge said...

A few corrections can result in making it better..


Mahesh Sindbandge said...

Would u like to share the code for top commentors..?

Ms.R. said...

I can dedicate this one to a couple of people :) Awesomeness loaded.

fms1988 said...

@ Mahesh would love to see your's do share them someday :) wil post the code in ur shoutbox.

@ Ms.R DEDICATIONS...hmmm nice :)

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