Monday, 8 June 2009

Teri Yaad



Teri yaad...aati hai humein
Har taraf dhoonte hai hum tumhein

Chup gaya ho door najane kahan
Nazrein meri jaaye na jahan

Seene mein chubti hai doori..
Tujh bin hoon main adhuri..

Palkon pe tere naam ke ashq chalak ne lage
Dard mein hum doobne lage..

Door humse hogaya hai koi..
Palkon ke peeche chupa hai koi..
Yaad aati hai subha shaam unki..
Tasveer ankhon mein basi hai Jinki...


25 comments:

Hopeless Romantic said...

first here to comment:)

Hopeless Romantic said...

should i give u a standing ovation for this :)

Awesome...keep penning..u know how much i love them:)

Cheers,
Amit

Hopeless Romantic said...

Am i on top now?

Hopeless Romantic said...

if not let me know when i am...i wld stop :)

fms1988 said...

I was thinking i jus posted it & 4 comments dekha toh AMIT !All four :P

Thanks anyway !

rabbit said...

kya baat hai yaar...
mast likhte ho aap to..

fms1988 said...

@ Rabbit shukriya :D

Ms.R. said...

It was beautiful. You could have written another stanza cuz you left me wanting for more of that. Keep writing hun!

Satans Darling™ said...

WOW :) I have fallen in love with your work. It's so simple, but so from the heart, and it really makes one wonder and fall into thoughts .. Loved it!

Megha Gupta said...

subhaan-allah!

wapis na laut sake tere aagosh se...
teri baahon tak meri zindagi simat jaaye...

keep going...
Megha

fms1988 said...

@ Ms.R yup i could have wrote more on that but when i was writing it..something came up so i dropped it & wen i got back i jus didn get the vibe again so had to leave it :)

fms1988 said...

@ Ash...Thats a lovely compliment :)Thanks alot for appreciating.

fms1988 said...

@ Megha...nice one :)

neeraj_only said...

U rocking with ur poems.

Feeling associated with "teri yaad" discovered in ur estyle.

fms1988 said...

@ Neeraj thnks yaar :)

Girl Next Door said...

Awesome !!! Really touching :)

fms1988 said...

@ GND My motive is always to write things tht r touching.:)

Thanks !

~*wILd chILd*~ said...

Heart touch.
Nice post.

fms1988 said...

@ Wild Child thanks :D

Pretty Me!! said...

this has a song like feel ... impressive !! love your blog :)

fms1988 said...

@ Pretty me thanks :)
Glad to know u like this place.

Shilpa Garg said...

WoW! Very beautifully penned!

fms1988 said...

@ Shilpa thank u :)

Ms.R. said...

Aaj to hattrick hogaya! Triple dose of your wonderful poems! Mast ekdum! Loved it (as usual)!

fms1988 said...

@ Ms.R i been missing your comments :P Good to see them again.

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