Teri yaad...aati hai humein
Har taraf dhoonte hai hum tumhein
Chup gaya ho door najane kahan
Nazrein meri jaaye na jahan
Seene mein chubti hai doori..
Tujh bin hoon main adhuri..
Palkon pe tere naam ke ashq chalak ne lage
Dard mein hum doobne lage..
Door humse hogaya hai koi..
Palkon ke peeche chupa hai koi..
Yaad aati hai subha shaam unki..
Tasveer ankhon mein basi hai Jinki...
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25 comments:
first here to comment:)
should i give u a standing ovation for this :)
Awesome...keep penning..u know how much i love them:)
Cheers,
Amit
Am i on top now?
if not let me know when i am...i wld stop :)
I was thinking i jus posted it & 4 comments dekha toh AMIT !All four :P
Thanks anyway !
kya baat hai yaar...
mast likhte ho aap to..
@ Rabbit shukriya :D
It was beautiful. You could have written another stanza cuz you left me wanting for more of that. Keep writing hun!
WOW :) I have fallen in love with your work. It's so simple, but so from the heart, and it really makes one wonder and fall into thoughts .. Loved it!
subhaan-allah!
wapis na laut sake tere aagosh se...
teri baahon tak meri zindagi simat jaaye...
keep going...
Megha
@ Ms.R yup i could have wrote more on that but when i was writing it..something came up so i dropped it & wen i got back i jus didn get the vibe again so had to leave it :)
@ Ash...Thats a lovely compliment :)Thanks alot for appreciating.
@ Megha...nice one :)
U rocking with ur poems.
Feeling associated with "teri yaad" discovered in ur estyle.
@ Neeraj thnks yaar :)
Awesome !!! Really touching :)
@ GND My motive is always to write things tht r touching.:)
Thanks !
Heart touch.
Nice post.
@ Wild Child thanks :D
this has a song like feel ... impressive !! love your blog :)
@ Pretty me thanks :)
Glad to know u like this place.
WoW! Very beautifully penned!
@ Shilpa thank u :)
Aaj to hattrick hogaya! Triple dose of your wonderful poems! Mast ekdum! Loved it (as usual)!
@ Ms.R i been missing your comments :P Good to see them again.
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