Mehfil mein muskurate huey chehro ke beech
Aaj ehsaas hua apni tanhayi ka
Kehte aaye barso se...jo dil mein ho
Woh door kabhi nahi hota
Aaj ehsaas hua,Dil mein hoke bhi woh kitna door hai
Suna toh tha,Pyar se hoti hai har kami poori
Magar aaj kyun ehsaas hua,Pyar karke bhi rehgayi main adhuri
Aansoo mein khushi chupi hai
Ya dard bhadi dastaan
Aaj ehsaas hua hamare aansoo mein chupa hai bass dil ka dard
sab ke sapne hojate hai apne
Aaj ehsaas hua mere sapne bhi chod gaye saath
Raah mein miljate hai logon ko koi humsafar
Aaj ehsaas hua humko na mila humsafar
Na mili chalne ki koi raah
Aaj ehsaas hua..Rhoot chuki hai humse hamari taqdeer
So gaye hai apne naseeb...
Aaj ehsaas hua na raha tu ab qareeb
Aaj..... ehsaas hua tu kisi aur ka hochuka.
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15 comments:
i don't have words to describe this piece !
keep writing!
amit
@ Amit thank's :) honestly speaking there is something about this after i went through it...i was like did i just rite this :)
aaj mujhe yeh ehsaas hua ki - u r one big kavita writer!
way to go, girl..keep writing:)
i also noticed u r penning lines ecery day...thats also good..keep expressing n live free!
b.e.a.u.t.i.f.u.l
@ Vinnie thank's hun,I really love to see your comments :) aur mujhe tumhara ehsaas acha laga lol :P
@ Kajal thnk youuuu :)
this was the height of honest poetry...
and when it is in hindi...
the expression somewhat seems the first sorm of purity!
:)
loved it!
god bless... fms!
@ Pulkit...That was a very touching comment thnks ever so much :)
Take care
Fatima.
You made me cry with these lines...
jo dil mein ho
Woh door kabhi nahi hota
Aaj ehsaas hua,Dil mein hoke bhi woh kitna door hai
Even as Im writing these, my eyes are wet. You know how I feel and why. Thank you so much for this one. You are amazing with words. Just fantabulous..
@ Ms.R *biggg hug*
Yep i know excatly why ur eyes are wet & i knew when u read it you will love those lines :) was sure of it !
Great to see ur comment again :)
Excellent piece.. Loved the line.. aansoo mein chupa hai bass dil ka dard
@ E Spirit thnx :) Good to know you liked that line.
lovely poetry...full of angst n pain but beautiful nonetheless!!!
@ C Numb Thank you so much :) i think sad poetries are the best.
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bahot dard hai aaapki kavita mein.
very well written!!
I'm speechless.
@ Wild Child woh kavita hi kya jismein dard na ho :)
I honestly blieve the sad ones are the best.:)
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