Dooba teri aankhon mein iss qadarPaya bass ek tujhe dekha jidharTu hi meri raaheinTu hi meri manzilTeri muskurahat pe fida huaKhud se ab toh main juda huaTujhmein najane kahan ghum huaMera dil ae-jaane-jigar ab tera huaKahoo kaisa hai ye ehsaasJab hoti hai tu mere paasKarle mera yakeen Duniya banadi meri tune rangeenTha kuch nahi paas mereMagar sab milgaya tere aane seSapna hai tu...Ehsaas hai tuMera sach hai tu..Meri duniya hai tuAe-sanam meri jeene ki wajah hai tu
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12 comments:
This is really good..
i liked it very much..rhyming, expression of ur feelings made lot of sense ...
Good one...
Keep writing..:)
Yayyy Mahesh is impressd :D
hmmm...u should join Javed Akhtar's team:)
i had written a hindi poem/song in my diary on behalf of a friend who lost his girlfriend...just didnt have the heart to post it:(
after reading ur piece, n the peace it brings, maybe i will post it..thanks!
@ Vinnie Javed Akhtar is my idol so that was lovely from you :D
I look forward to reading your post :)
this is an awesome piece..i run out of words when i read ur words...i give lame comments..sorry abt that...but u know ur a special person with special lines...awesome !
Keep it up !
cheers,
amit
@ Amit this sure is the best comment from you :P Thanks yaar..:D & trust me the others r not lame :P
like i told you every lil counts for me :)
Keep visiting.:)
Your comments are highly appreciated.
loved ur work dear!
m following ur blog :)
regards
pulkit
@ Pulkit thanks alot & a very warm welcome here :)
Lovely Indeed... Simple, Straight and expressive...
@ Priya thnk you :)
Hubby darling ne likha kya?! :P Awesome! Pyaar jhalak jhalak ke gir raha tha! Loooved it! :D
@ Ms.R lol...woh kya likhega :P uski taraf se main hi likh leti hoon,He read it & was like oh thats me isnt it :P
Gonna make him comment one of these day's.:) he always read's my posts.
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