Monday, 18 May 2009

Jeene Ki wajah

Dooba teri aankhon mein iss qadar
Paya bass ek tujhe dekha jidhar
Tu hi meri raahein
Tu hi meri manzil

Teri muskurahat pe fida hua
Khud se ab toh main juda hua
Tujhmein najane kahan ghum hua
Mera dil ae-jaane-jigar ab tera hua

Kahoo kaisa hai ye ehsaas
Jab hoti hai tu mere paas
Karle mera yakeen 
Duniya banadi meri tune rangeen

Tha kuch nahi paas mere
Magar sab milgaya tere aane se
Sapna hai tu...Ehsaas hai tu
Mera sach hai tu..Meri duniya hai tu
Ae-sanam meri jeene ki wajah hai  tu


Mahesh Sindbandge said...

This is really good..
i liked it very much..rhyming, expression of ur feelings made lot of sense ...

Good one...

Keep writing..:)

fms1988 said...

Yayyy Mahesh is impressd :D

Vinnie said...

hmmm...u should join Javed Akhtar's team:)

i had written a hindi poem/song in my diary on behalf of a friend who lost his girlfriend...just didnt have the heart to post it:(

after reading ur piece, n the peace it brings, maybe i will post it..thanks!

fms1988 said...

@ Vinnie Javed Akhtar is my idol so that was lovely from you :D

I look forward to reading your post :)

Hopeless Romantic said...

this is an awesome piece..i run out of words when i read ur words...i give lame comments..sorry abt that...but u know ur a special person with special lines...awesome !

Keep it up !

fms1988 said...

@ Amit this sure is the best comment from you :P Thanks yaar..:D & trust me the others r not lame :P
like i told you every lil counts for me :)

Keep visiting.:)
Your comments are highly appreciated.

PULKIT said...

loved ur work dear!
m following ur blog :)


fms1988 said...

@ Pulkit thanks alot & a very warm welcome here :)

CutePriya said...

Lovely Indeed... Simple, Straight and expressive...

fms1988 said...

@ Priya thnk you :)

Ms.R. said...

Hubby darling ne likha kya?! :P Awesome! Pyaar jhalak jhalak ke gir raha tha! Loooved it! :D

fms1988 said...

@ Ms.R lol...woh kya likhega :P uski taraf se main hi likh leti hoon,He read it & was like oh thats me isnt it :P

Gonna make him comment one of these day's.:) he always read's my posts.

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