Wednesday, 27 May 2009

Manzil


Khushi ka ehsaas phirse hone laga
Ghum peeche main chor ne laga
Sapno ki gali ...phirse mili...
Raahein hai nayi..
Manzilen hai wohi..

Roke agar koi toh rok ne de
Hum na rukenege kisi ke kehne se
Dekha hai dilse ek sapna
Bana ke rahenge har haal mein apna

Chalta jaa raha hu main 
Dard bhula chuka hu main 
Koi toh jaake kehde
Meri manzil ko ...
Laut aaraha hu main


15 comments:

PULKIT said...

beautifully optimistic!
:)
thanks for sharing!

Ms.R. said...

Beautiful. Determined. Awesome! :D

fms1988 said...

@ Pulkit & Ms.R Thnk's :) Im feeling pretty confident today :D

Sameera said...

Yay!! Yay!! Yay!! Lovely poem. Now thats the kind of poems I usually read. Awesome!! :)

Hopeless Romantic said...

crying sessions has its own therapeutic effects...spilled over the poem :D

Someone's confidence is back..great !

**when someone said u cant change the world..i never listened..but when my inner self ..u cant..i was shattered** -- Think about it !


Take care,
Amit

Girl Next Door said...

Very Well Written..Seems some optimism in the poem... Great.. Keep Rocking and Keep Posting :)

fms1988 said...

@ Sam i hope i can give birth to many more like this :)

@ Amit...yea this is crying sessions side effects :P thought about what u wrote :) makes alot of sense.

@ G N D THANKS :D

Krishanu said...

Beautiful...had a generous pint of originality.

fms1988 said...

@ Krish Thnks
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Mahesh Sindbandge said...

Wow...now i see some spirit of winner in the writer's character....

Good one fatima..

Cheers

fms1988 said...

@ Mahesh long time no see :P
Thanks for droppin by

Pretty Me!! said...

this was so wonderful !! really liked it :)

fms1988 said...

@ Pretty Me thanks hun :)
Keep visiting.

~*wILd chILd*~ said...

"Chalta jaa raha hu main
Dard bhula chuka hu main
Koi toh jaake kehde
Meri manzil ko ...
Laut aaraha hu main"

WOW! what b'ful lines.
Read it not once but many times
Loved it. :-)

fms1988 said...

@ Wild child thats my fav too :D

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