Monday, 11 May 2009

Magar...



Na thi jinhe pyar ki qadar
usse hi, dil de bethe hum
Jiss diye ko hawa se bachaya
Uss diye ne hi ye haath jalaya

Na jaane jo wafa ko
Uss se hi, wafa hum kar bethe
Jiss phool ko khoobsurat kaha
Ussi ke kaante chubne lage

Na kehta hai jo kabhi sach
Uss ko, hum sach pe sach bayaan karte gaye
Jiss baarish main maza lena chaha
Ussi main hum aaj doob gaye

Jo na karna chahte they
Woh sab kargaye
Wafa ke badle.. Bewafai paate gaye
Khushi ke badle..Ghum utha te chale

Phirbi muskurate huey khushi dete gaye
Toote huey dil ko hum jod te gaye
Magar... kya kare jab aaj
Koi apna hi dil tod chala
Raah mein tanha chod chala
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6 comments:

neeraj_only said...

hello fms !!!..phir se sad-wala poem related to love...loved this

your hindi is super good.

Hopeless Romantic said...

wah wah ...kya baat hain :P

excellent...if u keep writing like this...i may get inspired to again start writing hindi poems again...i havent done since 5 years :)

Cheers,
Amit

fms1988 said...

@ Neeraj i totally love writing sad stuff :P
My hindi is good thats a huge compliment coz im gujrati & i just learnt hindi by watching movies :P & visiting India loads of times.!

@ Amit Thank youuu :) i really think u should pick the pen up again & do what u have left behind for the past 5yrs.It's a diff buzz altogether writing in Hindi.I feel i can give more depth to a poem in hindi.

Girl Next Door said...

Hey Fms... yu write soo well... It was really touching...

Mahesh Sindbandge said...

Well this is the first peom i am reading at your blog...

Feelings are portrayed really well and i think you can use the words a little better to make it look more beautiful that it is.. :)

I must say...love brings out the poetry from hearts... :)

it is a good attempt from you..:)

keep writing

Tabitha said...

Hey...Thanks 4 stopping by...I read ur poems...Lovely!!!...Keep writing and do visit again :)

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