Friday, 22 May 2009


Loving you is a punishment
I didn't think my heart could be broken
Little did i know
u were there to do the honours
you heartbreaker
They say guys are players & cheats
Girl you sure came out & proved em all wrong
You loved Rihanna's take a bow song
Loved it coz It goes out to you..
Keep listenin to the track
Coz i aint taking u back

Why do people think guys dont get hurt
They just known to flirt
Let me tell you...we can love with honesty
Fulfill promises & spread smiles
We take away your painful cries

You girl... you broke my heart
Baby what d'you say about that
Always made it out i'll one day cheat
Insecure you were of your own deeds
A true lover is what my heart needs

You think i cant find another you
How wrong you are,i'll show you i can
With time my wounds will heal
Then a pure heart i shall steal

When your games are over,You will love truly
But he wont love you... he will play you
You sure will repent..It's gonna be too late
Don't forget "What goes around comes around"

That day you will feel
What i feel today
Till then girl...Go on & get goin
Play along your games of seduction ...

P.S This goes out to all the loyal guys out there..Coz in my poems usually it's the guy hurting the girl! So i thought it's not fair on loyal guy's, bcoz i truly know guys can love :) So went for a lil change.So that no one says im being mean to guys :P


Hopeless Romantic said...

thanks for being so considerate to guys :D

why suddenly i am facing girls who r mushy n caring for comments section of my latest post n u wld know what i mean!

nice post:)
tk care n have a great weekend!


PULKIT said...

makes me remember the song "i will survive..." by gloria garner

Preeti said...

wow ...nice poem ,...

I agree guys do love and they do get hurt just like us , and all of us in the end yearn for an honest relationship ...

AD said...

very brilliantly written :)

btw i have moved from blogger to wordpress and my new address for when he kisses her is

have a great weekend!

Vijay Kumar Sappatti said...


I really liked this poem... very emotional and touchy and meaning ful. and yes guys are sentimental most of the times..

aapko meri dil se badhai ..

meri nayi kavita padhkar apna pyar aur aashirwad khushi hongi....


fms1988 said...

@ Amit hmm y r girls being so caring ...they always are :P

U 2have a great wkend.

@ Pulkit it's a nice track tht is :)

@ Preeti Thank you,We sure need a nice loyal guy :) im lucky to have found mine.

@ AD & Vijay thank you,will check ur blog soon
keep visiting

Sameera said...

Oh my God!! Do you read minds...??? I was just thinking while reading your last poem why isn't it never the boy that is hurt in your poems.. and here you have this poem!:)

fms1988 said...

@ Sam REALLLY ...?I Guess i do read minds :P

IcE MaiDeN said...

Lovely poem. :) very very touching. :)

Keep them coming,
Lotsa luv,
Annie. :)

fms1988 said...

@ Annie will sure keep em loads pending to post :D

Enduring Spirit said...

Excellent poem.. Given my current situation..and ofcourse even the mention of rihanna's song in the poem .. makes me feel it was written with me in mind!!

Great work.


fms1988 said...

@ Enduring Spirit thanks,good to know u can relate to it totally :)

Keep visiting.

Ashwathy said...

very interesting...
few talk abt the guy's perspective.. esp the loyal ones. nice nice! keep it coming!

Pretty Me!! said...

really cool !! love the way you write .. direct dill se :)

fms1988 said...

@ Ashwathy & Pretty thank u sooo much :)

Keep visiting.

Ms.R. said...

Bravo! Bravo! Awesome one! I loved the reality and the way you wrote this. So smooth. Amazing!

fms1988 said...

@ Ms.R Thank you ...thank you @D

CutePriya said...

That was really Awesome! You truly understand a guys perspective (which may be most girls can't) , include me too)....

Loved every bit of it!

Keep Writing,

fms1988 said...

@Priya im so glad to hear that :D i dunno iv always known a guys perspective...umm i think coz i grew up with 2 brothers & im really really close to em. didn have a sis until i was like 13 !

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