Sunday, 3 May 2009

I just wanna let you know

Today i just wanna let you know
The love that i always show
Is true & will last forever
You truly mean the world to me

I never thought... i can be so lucky in love
Until the day u walked into my life
Ever since i fell in love with you
My days have never been blue

You turned my darkness into light
Given me a future that's so bright
You have made my life worthwhile
When i thought it was over

Each time you hold me
In your touch the love i feel
Each time you look at me
In your eyes an ocean of love i see

I cant imagine waking up Without u by my side
Or sleeping away from your warm embrace
I cant even think of living a day without u
Or not to hold you through the night

I don't need to ask is this love eternal
You don't need to make any promise
we know it deep in our hearts
We were & we are soul mates
Till death does us apart


P.S.I can say i totally relate to this & i penned it for the guy i totally love & adore with all my heart.(If your reading this, im sure you will.. i'll make sure u do.. :P i mean it..i really love you )

Because the last few posts were pretty heartbreaking & sad, it forced a few people to think that's the phase im going through :P but actually it's totally opp im very much in love & touch wood happy ..!

I enjoy writing sad heartbreaking poetry's maybe coz im very sensitive & my first ever poem Tanhayi hi apni mehfil was a sad one,when i wrote that i related to it totally.But not anymore :)

Hope a few of you are relieved to see this one...


Satans Darling™ said...

I loved it :) So cute and truly from the heart...

Ms.R. said...

Sahi mein. Straight from the heart. I was missin him so badly n after readin this aankhon mein aansu aagaye. LOL! I love what you right. Dil ko chu jata hai :D Take care! Love ya! God Bless :D

neeraj_only said...

so sweet...what a way to express...force him to read this...( if required use all )

u r soo good at poetry, u can always write this if "Dil-se"...long live this love :)

fms1988 said...

@ Satans Darling :Yup it's right from d bottom of my heart :)

fms1988 said...

@ Ms.R thanks soo much :D & sorry it bought tears to ur eyes,Inshallah u will be together soon :)

fms1988 said...

@ Neeraj: He's read it :P
& thanks for appreciatin my work :)

The Pink Orchid said...

lovely poem.. after a very long time i have read something so pleasant.. god bless!

fms1988 said...

@ Kajal thanks a ton :)


oh-so-beautiful poem...usually dont lyk in they have...u depth meanings...but this one has its meaning out CLEAR...that too so beautifully!!

fms1988 said...

@ True Beleiver Thanks hun,I do like to write things that have there meaning out clear.Dont like confusing the reader's mind :)

neeraj_only said...

ur thxs accepted for now...won't accept in future.....becoz i don't need them ..lolz

don't make me feel outsider by using this word :P

fms1988 said...

@ Neeraj ok :) wont use it in future

Mahesh Sindbandge said...

Hmmm nicely pen down...
the rhyming and the meaning really synced well in the poem...

Keep going and keep posting such beautiful poems...:)


AD said...

my God this is a pretty read :)

a prayer escapes my lips but i wont be loud :)

Sameera said...

Nice poem. Feelings give punch to poems.

But one thing I never understand about people in love is-- why they always feel their partners have led them from "darkness to light".

Why it is never like-- okay I had a very happy life and now- we are much more happier together...!

Dream'R said...

aww...thats so sweet...totally enjoyed it.. ;-)...

I guess love does this to people..sad poems, cute se poems..butmost of em love related poems..;-)

nice work


fms1988 said...

@ Mahesh...thank you im glad u liked it :)

@ AD hmm..wondering what the prayer was.....?

@ Sam well there are many people who say "Im alot happier now after i fell in love with you" but as far as im concerned then i really have to say the darkness went away :) after he came into my life.

@ Amith thank's keep visiting !

oo7 said...

u said it all
he's so lucky.

keep loving each other forever.

hugs and tc

Sameera said...


There are such people...?? great!!
And happy for you- for you found your happiness in him!! May God bless you both!

Vinnie said...

saw u in my followers list..nice poetry here...definitely heart felt one:)

ur blog is pretty n u r only 20 n married :)
all the best in ur writing career..n thank u!

fms1988 said...

@ 007 we both are lucky to have each other :D

@ Sam thank you....

@ Vinnie yup im following you :) i liked what ever i saw at ur end.Thanks for droppin by & hope to see u around often.

Karan said...

awwwww.. :) .. so sweet... as othrs hv said.. it is a straight frm the heart post..

u r very lucky... don't forget to say.. 'TouchWood' ... :) ...


fms1988 said...

Hey Karan thanks:D yea im verrrry lucky *Touchwood*:)

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