Loving you is a punishment
I didn't think my heart could be broken
Little did i know
u were there to do the honours
you heartbreaker
They say guys are players & cheats
Girl you sure came out & proved em all wrong
You loved Rihanna's take a bow song
Loved it coz It goes out to you..
Keep listenin to the track
Coz i aint taking u back
Why do people think guys dont get hurt
They just known to flirt
Let me tell you...we can love with honesty
Fulfill promises & spread smiles
We take away your painful cries
You girl... you broke my heart
Baby what d'you say about that
Always made it out i'll one day cheat
Insecure you were of your own deeds
A true lover is what my heart needs
You think i cant find another you
How wrong you are,i'll show you i can
With time my wounds will heal
Then a pure heart i shall steal
When your games are over,You will love truly
But he wont love you... he will play you
You sure will repent..It's gonna be too late
Don't forget "What goes around comes around"
That day you will feel
What i feel today
Till then girl...Go on & get goin
Play along your games of seduction ...
P.S This goes out to all the loyal guys out there..Coz in my poems usually it's the guy hurting the girl! So i thought it's not fair on loyal guy's, bcoz i truly know guys can love :) So went for a lil change.So that no one says im being mean to guys :P
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19 comments:
thanks for being so considerate to guys :D
why suddenly i am facing girls who r mushy n caring for guys..read comments section of my latest post n u wld know what i mean!
nice post:)
tk care n have a great weekend!
amit
makes me remember the song "i will survive..." by gloria garner
wow ...nice poem ,...
I agree guys do love and they do get hurt just like us , and all of us in the end yearn for an honest relationship ...
very brilliantly written :)
btw i have moved from blogger to wordpress and my new address for when he kisses her is http://whenhekissesher.wordpress.com
have a great weekend!
Hi,
I really liked this poem... very emotional and touchy and meaning ful. and yes guys are sentimental most of the times..
aapko meri dil se badhai ..
meri nayi kavita padhkar apna pyar aur aashirwad deve...to khushi hongi....
vijay
www.poemsofvijay.blogspot.com
@ Amit hmm y r girls being so caring ...they always are :P
U 2have a great wkend.
@ Pulkit it's a nice track tht is :)
@ Preeti Thank you,We sure need a nice loyal guy :) im lucky to have found mine.
@ AD & Vijay thank you,will check ur blog soon
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Oh my God!! Do you read minds...??? I was just thinking while reading your last poem why isn't it never the boy that is hurt in your poems.. and here you have this poem!:)
@ Sam REALLLY ...?I Guess i do read minds :P
Lovely poem. :) very very touching. :)
Keep them coming,
Lotsa luv,
Annie. :)
@ Annie will sure keep em coming...got loads pending to post :D
Excellent poem.. Given my current situation..and ofcourse even the mention of rihanna's song in the poem .. makes me feel it was written with me in mind!!
Great work.
Salutes.
@ Enduring Spirit thanks,good to know u can relate to it totally :)
Keep visiting.
very interesting...
few talk abt the guy's perspective.. esp the loyal ones. nice nice! keep it coming!
really cool !! love the way you write .. direct dill se :)
@ Ashwathy & Pretty thank u sooo much :)
Keep visiting.
Bravo! Bravo! Awesome one! I loved the reality and the way you wrote this. So smooth. Amazing!
@ Ms.R Thank you ...thank you @D
That was really Awesome! You truly understand a guys perspective (which may be most girls can't) , include me too)....
Loved every bit of it!
Keep Writing,
Love,
CutePriya
@Priya im so glad to hear that :D i dunno iv always known a guys perspective...umm i think coz i grew up with 2 brothers & im really really close to em. didn have a sis until i was like 13 !
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