Khushi ka ehsaas phirse hone laga
Ghum peeche main chor ne laga
Sapno ki gali ...phirse mili...
Raahein hai nayi..
Manzilen hai wohi..
Roke agar koi toh rok ne de
Hum na rukenege kisi ke kehne se
Dekha hai dilse ek sapna
Bana ke rahenge har haal mein apna
Chalta jaa raha hu main
Dard bhula chuka hu main
Koi toh jaake kehde
Meri manzil ko ...
Laut aaraha hu main
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beautifully optimistic!
:)
thanks for sharing!
Beautiful. Determined. Awesome! :D
@ Pulkit & Ms.R Thnk's :) Im feeling pretty confident today :D
Yay!! Yay!! Yay!! Lovely poem. Now thats the kind of poems I usually read. Awesome!! :)
crying sessions has its own therapeutic effects...spilled over the poem :D
Someone's confidence is back..great !
**when someone said u cant change the world..i never listened..but when my inner self ..u cant..i was shattered** -- Think about it !
Take care,
Amit
Very Well Written..Seems some optimism in the poem... Great.. Keep Rocking and Keep Posting :)
@ Sam i hope i can give birth to many more like this :)
@ Amit...yea this is crying sessions side effects :P thought about what u wrote :) makes alot of sense.
@ G N D THANKS :D
Beautiful...had a generous pint of originality.
@ Krish Thnks
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Wow...now i see some spirit of winner in the writer's character....
Good one fatima..
Cheers
@ Mahesh long time no see :P
Thanks for droppin by
this was so wonderful !! really liked it :)
@ Pretty Me thanks hun :)
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"Chalta jaa raha hu main
Dard bhula chuka hu main
Koi toh jaake kehde
Meri manzil ko ...
Laut aaraha hu main"
WOW! what b'ful lines.
Read it not once but many times
Loved it. :-)
@ Wild child thats my fav too :D
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