Socha tha woh pyar hai Ab Jaana ke sirf khel hai
Duniya se kya shikwa kare
Tanha mehfil main hum hai khade
Yaad aane laga beeta hua kal
Zindagi badal gayi thi jab aaya woh pal
Jisne kaha hum unke liye hai sab kuch
Aaj rehgaye hum unke kuch nahi
Pyar ke waade kiye nahi humne
Na kabhi dil mein pyar jagaya
Dost banke saath deti gayi
Woh humpe pyar barsaate gaya
Door bhaagte gaye hum
Paas aata gaya woh
Dil pe qaboo khone lage hum
Na chahte huey uske hone lagey hum
Khogayi pyar ke khel mein main
Hasta gaya dil hi dil mein
Woh hamari nadaani pe
Samajh na saki sach ko main
Phoolon ki khoobsurti dekhti gayi
Najane kab kaante chub gaye
Khoon beh ne laga haathon se
Dard hone laga seene mein
Meethe bol se pyar ka khel khela usne
Zeher se bhada tha har ek shabd
Ye aaj jaana humne
wah ! Kya khel khela hai usne
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10 comments:
no words to describe how much i liked! u made me speechless! i recently wrote a poem on similar theme and reading this here i m just too overwhelmed!
Love you for this one :-)
@ Nabila Thank's :) would love to read yours too.
Keep Visiting.
Awesome!!
The trasition in the feelings of the girl expressed- beautiful!
:)
On a lighter note:
Before a relationship starts:
Woman- the master
Man- the slave
After a relationship blossoms:
Woman- the slave
Man- the master!
@fatima
awesome is the only word i can say for this...keep penning !
PS: kitna dard chupa kar rakha hain dil mein ;)
Cheers,
amit
@Sameera
Ask any married male ...he would tell u who is the slave and who is the master :P
cheers,
amit
@Fatima
I have read it again and it has touched me again !
Touching!! Well expressed :)
@ Sam Thank you :)
@ Amit dil mein dard chupa ke chalna padta hai :P just kidding no dard in me.
& i guess alot of ppl will agree about the Woman master man slave after marriage,Although i DONT agree at all :P
@ Sapi thank you keep visiting
I have only one word for you - AMAZING. The way you played with words - WOW! I love your poems for the smooth stylke of writing. I mean really - smooth. Wonderful work once again gurl!
@ Ms.R thank you for ur comment's.Truly appreciated :D
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