It's in his eyes i see He doesnt need me
Its in his heart
Soon we are gonna be apart
Its in his mind
Another prey he's gonna find
He hugs me tight..it hurts
He says he loves me..It's fake
He tells me he needs me..Its a lie
He kisses my lips..Its lust
He says he cant live without me..It kills
Why am i still with him
Why dont i let go
Why do i know the truth
Why cant he just love me
The way i thought he did.
He was the guy of my dreams
Now he's just a player it seems
What did i do so wrong
He broke my heart for so long
Couldn't it end even before it started
I'v just been thrown around
Now iv fallen to the ground... So hard
i couldn't even hear the sound
Of my.....broken heart.
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24 comments:
nice little sweet heart breaking piece of poetry :)
Nice poem... but I love all good things! :(
No heart breaks! :)
hey...tho i dont noe u...
still couldnt stop myself from commentin on this one....
man its lyk u'v written my history...that too so precisely!!!
and its SO beautifully written!!!
@Amit thanks :)
Dont know where this actually came from..Just ended up bein the way it is.
@ Sam next one will be a happy one :) coz i dont relate to whats written but i just wrote it.
@ True Believer Thank's :) nice to know iv managed to put your feelings in words
Welcome to my blog keep visiting.
Shit! That was amazing! In love with a playa. That sure hurt
@ Ms.R thank's :)
Not related to me at all though!
Hi!
Your words pinched me hard. I mean, it was fabulous! totally. Made me still for a moment and made me think about all you've written. Too good girl!
And not just true believer, I'm sure this is the story of many girls!
Take Care!
You're...you're too good!
@ Juhi Thank's...:)
yup sadly many girls can relate to it :(
Keep visiting.
I liked the poem..
A Girl broken badly can realte with this poem very well
Lately i see you writing so many sad poems....
IF its right waht i am thinking..then i wish that guy reads it and gets back to his senses...
Good poem... :)
Keep writing..:)
Aww babe! LOL! I'm not like most of the other bloggers who think that whenever a blogger writes, its about themselves. Hehehe! No projudices here! Awesome right up I'll say once again! :D
@ Mahesh Lol..Nice to know u liked d poem.
Yep He does read it infact he reads all i write on my blog but....He hasnt hurt me :P We are very much in love.
I just write these poems although i dont relate to them i enjoy writing something that im not feeling.
Inshallah next one will be a happy one that i relate to :) it'l be alot easier to write that i guess.
@ Ms.R. yup u know well that i dont relate to this,Coz u write stuff yourself that u dont relate to aswell :D
as they say it's always better to take a second look.
be careful next time...
you'll find your prince one day.
tc n have fun
cheers
mood of all my friends changing simultaneously....every1 writing/talking about "side-effects of love".
p.s : ur all poems r good, so i won't mention this :P ...lolz
@ 007 no no...i got my prince already :D & he loves me alot
I just wrote this aise hi...like iv said above in a few comments i like to write something i dont feel or relate to.It's fun :)
@ Neeraj what can be done Pyar ke side effects are such one ends up writing things like this. :)
Keep commenting :)
srry my mistake.. ;D
take care lol
@ 007 it's ok :D
Hota hai.
hey nc poem yar ..i hv seen so many time that, who never felt that type of feelings they can write in such topic very well like u .:P
@ Shanky thanks :)
welcome to my blog ..hope u enjoy it & keep commenting.
Very well written :)
Thanks alot :)
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