Just sharing a piece of poetry with you that i wrote a few months ago i dont know what made me write it but i just picked up the pen & by the end of it this is what was left on the paper i didn feel the need to make any changes i just left it the way it was.Was going through some of my writings & as i came across this one the thought of sharing with you all came to mind.
Adhuri Kahani
Tu jo nahi teri yaad mein gumsum rehte hai
Aankhon mein tujhse milne ke sapne rehte hai
Paas aaye jab tu..Beetein lamhe sata ne lagte hai
Palkon pe ashk chalak ne lagte hai
Na janu main..Na jaane tu
Hota hai ye kyun...
Dil milke bichad te hai kyun
Kaisi hai ye mohabbat
Door rehke..Doorie na sahi jaaye
Paas aake paas raha na jaaye
Iss bebasi pe chalta na koi zor
Iss bebasi pe chalta na koi zor
Tootne se kaise roke ye pyar ki dor
Na janu main..Na jaane tu
Hota hai ye kyun...
Dil milke bichad te hai kyun
Rooh mein samaya hai tu
Apne hi rooh ko kaise juda karlu
Roshni se bhada kyun nahi rehta apna jahaan
Andhero mein apne pyar ko main dhundu kahan
Khone lagi kyun apni khushi
Pyar hote huey bhi,Kyun hai ye kahani adhuri
Na jaanu main..Na jaane tu
Hota hai ye kyun
Dil milke bichad te hai kyun.
Let me know what you think !
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5 comments:
nice one :) ..i used to write a lot of romantic poems in hindi in my teens...lost the zing n the comfort level over the years with the language..but still it makes me feel so good when i read smthing as good as this !!
Amit u make urself sound so old...lol kiddin!
thnx 4 readin!!Alot more to come
is amit so old ???? :P
Jokes apart.....
your poem really made me think you know...it has that thing in it...
i liked it actually , and my pick of best lines in it are :
Na janu main..Na jaane tu
Hota hai ye kyun...
Dil milke bichad te hai kyun
if i was in your place i would rather change it to
Na janu main..Na jaane tu
Hota hai ye kyun...
Agar bichadna hi hai to
Dil milke te hai kyun
Well thats me...:P
your peom is good :)
NOM
you seem to be new here....
welcome to this world.......
its fun here when you make like minded friends.... :)
Chalo take care..
Cheers
Oye mahesh Uncle....i am nt that old...u cn see my profiel ;)...what i meant was its been so long..almost 8 years i havent written something in hindi:P
was just kidding :P
Amit
@ Mahesh
Thanks a ton 4 readin,I do like ur way of the verse aswell its real good!
Keep visitin ...
Tk care
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