Hasi ke peeche hazaaron aansoo chupa te chale
Dil mein ghum ka dariya sambhaalte huey
Na koi raasta...Na koi manzil
Hogaya kitna paraya apna hi dil
Umeed ki thi maine khushiyon ki
Ab toh woh kashtiyan bhi doob chuki hai
Har koi lagne laga hai paraya
Mujhse juda hochuka mera hi saaya
Darte hai hum khwabon se
Kahin phirse umeed na laga bhete apno se
Ab toh tanhayi hi apni mehfil hai
Ye soch ke har pal ko jiye jaa rahe hai
This is very close to me,Because it's the first ever hindi poem i wrote (when i was 17) & it's also the first poem in my poetry book Najane Kyun which consists of 107 poems by me. :)
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15 comments:
Nice poem.. very sensitive..
Good job
@ Mad Blogger Thank you :)
Keep visiting.
Very Touching... Can relate with you. Even I have stopped expecting from people.
U rock girl !Awesome
*bows*
If this was your first..then hell u must be a damn good writer by now!
omg!!! do u knw hw much i related to dat poem???!!!! n how much it is similiar to wht i m feeling ryt now...
it was beautiful!! :)
seriously i agree.. u must be an amzaing poetess!!
Lovely poem! Must say you write very well :D
Power lines:
Har koi lagne laga hai paraya
Mujhse juda hochuka mera hi saaya
I loved them!
Wow... I loved it! There is an amazing flow of emotions... And most of us have been through such a stage in life atleast once! Good going lady :)
fantabulous!!! just touches the heart!!
@ Annie thnx hun for readin,It's nice to know when someone can relate to your words :)but hopefully you wont be relatin to it for long...
@Ms.R
Those are my fav lines too :)
(Another thing in common!lol )
@ Arshita True there's always a time when we end up being so alone.
@ P M Thank's a ton !
wow i loved this poem
and if this is ur first i cant even imagine what a great poet ur now ....
and everyone can so relate to these lines at some point in life.....u write magic ...keep writing :D
@ Nabila Your comment is truly appreciated :D
*Hugzzz*
3rd time me trying to comment here....previous 2 attempts....ware eaten by power-cut ( my UPS....kharaab ho gaya hai :( )
So niceee poem this, and gowd!! u wer so good at poems at 17 ...gr8....and 107 poem book...too good
reading 1st lines ...i remember lines from song "bandya" ..movie "khuda ke liye"
#"They See Only Happiness
They Cant See The Tears I've Cried "
bedard jamana...hehehe...go g8 fms :)
@ Neeraj thank youuuu,
So sweet you tried until u got u comment posted :D
107 Poems that too in Hindi? Gal You surely have talent. Why are you wasting it? Get a book published... Would love to get the 1st copy autographed by you:)
Keep writing
@ Sangeet i do have a book published :) its says it here in the post aswell.But it wasnt a pleasant publication process :( although i do have copies of the book. lemmi know if u want 1 sent across
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